Eko

[Walking da Streets]

Name:Eko
Age:3
Sex: Dog
Breed: Doberman
Personality: He is not a nice dog really.
He can be quiet and change in an instant, to a visiouc and dangerous dog.
He is usually seen alone and calm.
He is dangerous when provoked, but is smart he will atack usually but he knows when to runa nd when to fight.
He is quiet sarcastic and is a bit of a bully, he is very arrogant.
Most people see hima s arrogant but, mysterious. Strong but can be nice around friends. Calm when with new faces unless they are not happy for his company.

Physical Description:
Large shiny teeth, pure black ebony coat, brown/amber points.
Deep brown eyes, appears visious is when approached, mostly seen baring teeth, black nose, black skin.

Sample Post:

Eko barked at the man, the man stood over himthe net large and intimidating.
Eko contorted the muscles in his leg leaping up latching his pearly hite teeth round the wooden rimof the net, tugging violently.The man pulled it out of his grasp slamming it towards young Eko who leapt to the side, pushing up, barking visoucly he landed on the mans torso pushing him back wards barking in the mans face before turning and bounding off.He wriggled behind some dumpsters he came to a wired fence he backed up and then sprinted forward, jumping he cleared the fence to bound down the alley thesound of cars blared in the thin alleyways.


*History:

Eko was bred as a gaurd dog, younger the man he was sold to was unpleased with his dogs and left them the humane society rescued them, but s the tried to get themin Eko struggled and bit, escaping the grasp he ran off and entered teh center of the city, adn became a street dog. Befriending another dog Masus, taught him the ways of a street dog, he is new to this area of NYC but is going to prove himself, even being so young.

*Picture:

[Disturbed]

Okay, that personality is WAY too short. If you'd read the rules, you'd see it asks for at least four lines and you gave me four words. Sorry if I sound a little harsh but simply listing traits of your dog is what I'd call lazy...

If you'd like a little help, here's a nice thread that might help you out:
puxtias.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=help&action=display&thread=1145119578

I seriously recommend reading it...

[Walking da Streets]

oh sorry i thought it was the history and exapmle post that ahd to be long i'll mod it sorry again.

[Disturbed]

Much better but a little confusing. He is quiet but can change... change to what? When does he change? With whom is he usually talking? A stranger? A close friend? What does the creature he is talking with usually think of this? What do others think of him in general? Do they hate him? Like him? Want to kick his ass? And how does he respond to all this?

Now, all of that isn;t truly necessary but I found that the more specific you are with your character, the less likely you are to loose your muse... not always, but usually. So, you don't have to make those modifications but it would be helpful...

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